WALA: writing a great narrative with an: orientation, complication, Series of Events and a Resolution for all the characters. We also used good phrases and speech and thoughts of the characters.
Here is mine about Greedy Cat - The Pepper Problem
Here is mine about Greedy Cat - The Pepper Problem
The Pepper Problem
Early one morning a soft round-faced Mum dropped Kate off at school, the very next second Mum had arrived at the market.
At the local shop where Mum and was at, a stripy, oval shaped cat was lurking behind a shelf. He was as quiet as a mouse as he sneaked up on Mum, hoping to see her put some sausages or another yummy food in the bag.
“Oh, boy I like sausages!” he whispered to himself.
Mum walked to school to bring Kate home. As she walked through the door she saw Greedy cat.
“Mmmm! I want some food,” thought Greedy cat. Little did he know Mum was watching and had put some food that was a can of pepper in the bag to trick him. Along came Greedy cat, totally unawares. He peered in the shopping bag.
“Gobble, gobble” gulped Greedy cat. Suddenly he realised he’d eaten some hot pepper!
“YOOOOOOW!” screeched Greedy cat as he zoomed out the cat door.
“I’m never going to eat food from mum again. Ever, ever, ever!” He thought to himself.
“My plan worked,” chuckled mum, looking out the window watching Greedy cat choking on the lawn.
